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[Keamian Territories]

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The beginning may not be real original but, it works. This song I wrote after I comforted one of my friends that several months later would become mine. This song is over a year old. I don’t know where I got the idea. But I think I heard some of the lyrics before in a country song.

I can see you standing there
With tears in your eyes
I know he left you for her
And you’re wondering why
He could go with her
After saying all those
Sweet things to you
And I can’t tell you why

Because you’re hotter then her
You’re nicer then her
You’re smarter then her
And I know your wondering why

But I can’t stand to see you cry
I watch your hair fall in to your eyes
And you hanging your head
and I want to say


You’re hotter then her
You’re nicer then her
You’re smarter then her
And I know your wondering why

I watch a burnet
Glancing at me in class
And I now I can hit
This ball straight out of the park
But I can’t take the swing

Because you’re hotter then her
You’re nicer then her
You’re smarter then her
And I know your wondering why

note: Now only if I could sing...

[BealtleManium]

New said:

Which one and I ain't even 1/100 of a percent done. In a minute I'll post another one.

both ... another! gosh dang, you type fast

[Keamian Territories]

The following is one I could see an emo kid singing kneeled infront of a girl he loved. It's a real funny thought.

Triple S 370

Every morning I step on
And I look at you glance at me
But, I wish you knew
The way I feel
Every time I look at you

Because deep in my heart
I feel odd inside
And my mind drifts away again
And I don’t know the reasons
Why
A brown haired girl can take my breath away
So easily

I act like an idiot
So you always turn away
And I wish I could say
What I want to say
But, it’s not that easy

Because deep in my heart
I feel odd inside
And my mind drifts away again
And I don’t know the reasons
Why
A brown haired girl can take my breath away
So easily

I wish I knew why
Things can hit you like this
The reasons just can’t be defined
But I got this feeling
I can’t shake off
And I wish you knew
What I want you to know

But no matter how hard
I try
The words just won’t come
But I wish you knew
What I want you to know

Note the next part when my friend sings it is just simply
I love you
But, I like to keep that part out. Even if it was the way it was originally written.

[Keamian Territories]

Tommorrow I will post more. And if i hear one of my songs on the radio in a year I am going to open up a big can of.....

Yes I know i type 60 miles an hour.

[BealtleManium]

May the wind be always at your back...

Rejection
I stare into the corner,
Blind oblivion awaits.
I blink, and darkness
covers my world.
My mind aches,
it throbs, about
to implode.
My feelings about
to explode.
My bones quiver,
an earthquake shakes me
to the ground.
Something cracks,
it's my hope.
I have not forgotten,
pain.
of the time when I
was younger.
When my heart could take no more.
The rejection of the world,
a pinprick,
compared to the stinging sword.
Which she used to reject me,
I'm scarred, stay away for
her rejection was enough,
so that you can no longer stay.
Just leave me be, to my
own devices, and dreams of
what might have been

[Boolari]

I disagree with you, Klington. However, I do see your point. ;D

They enlist to serve their country, because they feel like that's the only thing they're good at (which can be something incredible...), or they need a job.

They don't enlist FOR a particular war. Just war itself.

I do believe that war is just a means to an end, not the end itself. I cannot imagine the world at peace. By 'peace' I mean all the nations and their forms of government being united on the international level.

[BealtleManium]

read 1984... ehhh It will scare you out of your mind.... or that George Lucas Film, THX(somthing something something)

[Keamian Territories]

I want to ask, how good my songs are and if anyone want's me to post more? I don't want to spam this thread.

[BealtleManium]

They're very indvidual and are very well written, spam here anytime

[Klington]

Boolari said:

I disagree with you, Klington. However, I do see your point. ;D

They enlist to serve their country, because they feel like that's the only thing they're good at (which can be something incredible...), or they need a job.

They don't enlist FOR a particular war. Just war itself.

I do believe that war is just a means to an end, not the end itself. I cannot imagine the world at peace. By 'peace' I mean all the nations and their forms of government being united on the international level.

I didnt say they enlisted for a certain war, I said when they enlisted they knew there could have been a war, and if there is, they better be ready for it. Im pretty sure the army even allows pardons for people who disapprove of wars, so they dont have to fight, you must admit, thats being pretty lienent. If you join the army, you should always, always know that if a war happens, you will be called on. So if you dont like the war, too bad, you know that it is your responsability(sp?).

[Boolari]

LOL, I'll agree on the part about too bad because you'll have to fight in it if that's where they send you. However, the whole part about pardons and what not... the folks whose contracts expired a year ago and have been told they've had to stay... *sigh*

[Keamian Territories]

Guys, need some feedback on my song lyrics.

Oh, and I pulled onr of them off.

[Keamian Territories]

Best Friends

He can pick a guitar
Till his fingers start to bleed
He can sing a song really
High and sweet
In till his voices gives out
He can get all the girls
And dance all night

But he’s got a problem
Deep down inside
It’s the end of his innocents
Doesn’t know what to do

She can play bass
Any song you like
She can lay on your shoulder
And talk all night

But she’s got a problem
Deep down inside
It’s the end of her innocents
She doesn’t know what to do

I hate standing on the sideline
Watching as they fall apart
Can only do so much
For these friends of mine
And I wish I could help them
Even thou I know I can’t
Except for try to keep them
Away from as much as I can



Note: This is about two of my best friends whose parents are going through a divorce. It isn’t my best but, like all the other things it comes from what I fell.

[Free Guns For All]

Just trying to revive a thread, don't mind me.

[Echolilia]

The light at the end of the tunnel
We look for it, long for it, wait for it
But do we stop to think
How the tunnel feels?

[Free Guns For All]

[Echolilia]

[Biblical Importance]

[Echolilia]

I make a face
and you make a face
and we make a face
together.

[Free Guns For All]

[Echolilia]

Have a very
very very very
very very very
nice day
in every way