Battle Between NAG and NA

[Greek People Nation (GPN)]

This is were the battle between New Age Guilds and the NA will be fought.

I repeat, NAG you have 24 hours to stand down.

[New Age Guilds]

i refuse to stand down.

OOC

i was thinking of writing a reolution about international holidays. i think t wierd we get national holidayas for christian dates, but not others.

does thi sound good

[New Dracora]

*Starts taking bets on the outcome.*

[New Age Guilds]

hehehehe

[Stewie States II]

Let hit him where it hurts! Right at the knees ;D -

[Greek People Nation (GPN)]

New said:

*Starts taking bets on the outcome.*

HAHAHA thats a good right there.


Greek People Nation Troops mobilze on the Right Flank of NAG.

[New Age Guilds]

thats a bit fast. u havnt even loaded your ships onto transports. u still have to fly/ship ur men to my island.


use the map for reference

[Stewie States II]

I begin to load my forces onto helicopter transports. We will be prepared and on your left flank in 36 hours.

[New Age Guilds]

sam missile bateries preped and ready for launch. ABM launchers also ready., mobolisation of the 1st-34 airborne regiments to be deployed

[Greek People Nation (GPN)]

All Greek People Nation Naval Ships head Northeast about 60 degrees.

[Klington]

OOC:
What are you people doing!!!!

Ok, you want a good RP, you don't post one sentence, thats a summary, not a post. In essence your entire post may constitute the one action you could have summed up in those little sentences, but it should be big, comprehensive and all the like. You should also develop a main character, like a general or something of that nature, it helps to fill in fluff and make the RP more interesting. Be descriptive! Let me take out a post I made and show you some examples:

Narthaus turned to Daniel, "Im not waiting around, let's go!" He said as he turned and rushed into the fray of battle. He weilded his sword up against his shoulder, as he was within range of one of the Chronies he swung his sword broadly in a diagonal fashion, as the body began to slide apart, he reversed dirctions with the blade and went through the cut again, this time stopping near the middle to cut straight up through the spine and out the head, all in a bloodly blur of motion. He than jumped as the enemys body split in two, the bodies remains hadn't fully hit the ground yet and Narthaus found himself jumping through a shower of blood. He came out of the other side covered in his enemies blood with his sword co.cked in a stabbing position, heading straight for Obsidian.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! He screamed as he let out a mighty battle kiai. Then right as it was the perfect moment to stick the blade through his enemy, he disappeared in a flash of energy....

You see the post? It was full of details and description. Now this is what you guys are doing:

Narthaus ran up to the enemy and cut through him with his sword, he jumped through the gore and co.cked his sword ready to stab at Obsidian, than disappeared....

You see the difference?

[Greek People Nation (GPN)]

Sorry didn't mean to offend you.

[Klington]

Greek said:

Sorry didn't mean to offend you.

None taken, Im just saying, if you guys want an RP to be remembered, than make a good one! It doesn't have to be perfection, just add a little substance. I mean, otherwise you could just play this out on AIM and post the results in a thread.

[New Age Guilds]

were not trying to get remembered. im trying to ban nukes

[Stewie States II]

And it will never happen, nukes are good and for defensive reasons.

[New Dracora]

[ooc] Remembered is not quite the word I would use - more enjoyable is what I would say... but that's just me.

Anywho, if you want a good example of what Klington is talking about you might want to take a look at this RP thread. Note how it starts off with fairly small posts to begin with then progresses into posts of monolithic proportions as peeps really get into it. That's how you know when a RP is entertaining. [/ooc]

Current odds:

NA deceisive victory - 10/1
NA average victory - 8/1
NA marginal victory - 4/1
NAG marginal victory - 3/1
NAG average victory - 23/3
NAG deceisive victory - 9/1
Both sides anhillate each other - 150/1
Both sides anhillate the region - 500/1
Both sides anhillate the entire NS world - 25/1

[New Age Guilds]

i put 3 billion on NAG will have a desicive win
;D ;D ;D

[Stewie States II]

20 biilion on an NA Decisive victory.

[Greek People Nation (GPN)]

This Battle has come to a cease. It will pick up later on.

[New Dracora]

Greek said:

This Battle has come to a cease. It will pick up later on.

Well it looks like no one either won or lost.....

*Collects all bets, makes 23 billion dollars ;D*